Sunday 15 February 2009

A Day to Remember (Gordon)

It was a hot and dry summer. No job, family parted. The doorbell rang with a persistence that echoed with a vibration through the house. It rang three times before I could run down the stairs to open the door. I wondered, as I rushed, will the visitor have turned away. As I opened the door I could see it was James, my neighbour. “Hi James, how are things?” “Fine” he replied. He stood at the door with an awkward stance as though one leg were longer than the other. It was as though he were ready to run away. He said: “I hear you are out of a job?” “Yes”, I said with a soft uncertainty. “You know, I have just bought a small farm and I am looking for a share farmer. What do you think?” I was startled.

There was a long pause. My mind was racing. I had no experience with farming. How could I look after a farm? I knew nothing about it? Could I make enough money? What would I do with my townhouse? Would I need to have money? How much money would I earn? Would it be enough?

I said: “James, come in--we need to talk.” I waived him inside. James came through the door with a sort of a limp and an awkward walk and we shook hands. “What about a cup of coffee?” I asked. “Sure” he said.

The deal was done. I signed the share farming agreement and so began my new career.

There was only time to pack my bags and drive the 100 kilometres to the farm. “About 2,000 hectares and 3,000 sheep” James said, with excitement. He drove and talked of his dreams every moment of the way. It was his life savings, and more, invested in this farm but his health was not up to what was needed. He needed someone he could trust. How I felt buoyed by the life change this represented. We turned off the highway and into a lane of tall white gums overhanging both sides of the gravel road. The ground was undulating, dry and covered with scattered yet elegant grandfather trees. “Here we are” James said. This will be your house. It had a veranda surrounding a stone building, at least 100 years old. The only words I could utter were: “Wow this is fantastic.”

We walked around the house, we walked into each of the sheds—the shearing shed, the machinery shed, a garage, three large water tanks, a grain silo, stock yards and jetting equipment. There was a utility with a water tank beside it.

Suddenly, I felt a movement under my boot. I looked down—it was a snake urgently slithering through the long grass beside the machinery shed. I screamed: “Hell! James, help.” I ran and ran and in my mind ran even further past the utility, past the house and into the car. My blood was pumping like I had never experienced before.

Gordon MacAulay
15 February 2009

4 comments:

Scriveners said...

An exciting day, Gordon, where your dreams finally come true - although James' description of the farm as 'small' is a bit of an understatement for 2000 hectares! You were obviously excited by the prospect. I loved your description of your first sighting of the property. The last paragraph confused me however. I didn't understand the significance of the snake. Were you suddenly overwhelmed by the enormity of what you had taken on and just wanted to head back to town?
Kerry

Unknown said...

Jenny says:

A great life change, and the farm was really well described.

I was also confused as to the impact of the snake experience - reason to quit, or just part of life's rich tapestry?

sue moffitt said...

Great story Gordon. I was totally engrossed. Is this your true dream?!! Your writing took on a truly inspiring tone when you got to the share farm, described the road with grandfather trees (I love that phrase)

I would have been right beside you as you dashed to the shelter of the car. I'm terrified of those slipery devils. I did find this a rather abrupt ending though and would love to know what happens next.

I think you should take up creative writing. You create great word pictures. thanks

Unknown said...

Your passion shines through and every word counts in creating the pictures that make this story so compelling.

Not sure what the significance of James’ limp was. I’m assuming it is related to his general health issues but I think this could have woven a little more explicitly. It was obviously important as you mentioned it at least twice.

The description of your arrival is wonderful. I love the “lane of tall white gums overhanging both sides of the gravel road”.

I was a little unnerved by the ending. My reaction was: please don’t give up! – but I was afraid he was. He can’t be really just a city-slicker playing with the whole idea!