Wednesday 1 July 2009

Out of hiding (by Heather)

Write about a time you were hiding or in disguise.

“Em-i-lee. Em-i-LEE!”

The bellowing voice, roughened by years of alcohol abuse and slurred by the day’s drinking, brought Emily’s hands over her ears.

She crouched in the shadows under a shrub in the back garden, light from the house windows spilling around her. As soon as she had heard the truck in the driveway, she had dropped her book and scuttled out to the back garden. Mince apparently decided to go into hiding as well, as he cuddled up to her with his little terrier tail wagging. Mince was as familiar with the drill as Emily was; he’d been pounded on and kicked across the floor about as often as Emily had. And he was just as perplexed by Bill’s dual personalities as Emily was.

Emily regarded herself wryly. Here she was, top of her self-defence class, cowering under the acacia while Bill went on yet another rampage inside the house. It would be funny if it weren’t so scary.

She could hear crashing inside – probably books being pulled off the shelves, a sound guaranteed to bring her out of hiding and into the house in defence of her possessions and her lifestyle. After six years, they had a well-established pattern. Bill would get drunk and give himself permission to do whatever, whatever, he felt like. Emily would try to talk him down, copping whatever came her way in the process. And Mince would mediate in a confused frenzy between them, taking the knocks every good umpire can expect from time to time.

She scratched absently behind his ear, took a deep breath and reviewed her resolve. For six months now she had been taking classes twice a week. Self-defence classes. Actually, as Sam had told them on the first night, they were really street fighting classes. If you no kidding wanted to protect yourself, you fought in whatever way you needed to, and you took the offence when you needed to. And now every week for six months she had learned fight techniques in a Tuesday class and gone to practice them one-on-one with Sam on Thursdays. She had practiced at home in front of the mirror. She had practiced on Mince (in the friendliest of ways) to his ecstatic surprise.

Emily’s heart hammered with the usual fear, and with something else, a steely something that she’d experienced a few times in the classes when she bested an opponent. Something that whispered that her days of hiding in the garden were over.

“Mince, stay here. Stay, boy,” she murmured, and brought herself to standing. She breathed deeply and flexed as she had been taught to do. She was ready.

She walked in.

Bill stopped mid-swipe and looked at her in some surprise.

“Where were you?” he growled. He did a double-take. “Whatdya do with your hair? You cut your hair?” he repeated, accusingly, threateningly.

Emily was thrown for a second – in the rush of adrenalin she’d forgotten the severe bob she’d had done at the hairdresser’s this afternoon. She’d known that Bill was off drinking, and she knew his favourite handle on her was her long ponytail. The fear upped a notch, and so did the steely something.

“You stupid bitch,” he snarled.

He swung toward her.



Moments later it was over. Bill lay sprawled on the floor next to the kitchen.

Emily leaned against the door frame, panting lightly. The moves she’d executed still tingled in her muscles. Slash to windpipe. Stomp on toes. Kick to groin. Smash to temple. A satisfied sound escaped her.

Okay. Tie him up or get out fast?

She chose the latter. Get out; worry later, grieve later, plan later.

She snatched up her handbag and swept a pile of CDs off the shelf into it. She grabbed the big old album of family photos and her Best Player 2004 soccer trophy.

Bill groaned and stirred slightly.

She found her keys in the pocket of her handbag, pausing in the doorway to say goodbye to a handful of treasured possessions and a partnership that had been inert for a long time.

“Mince!” she called. “C’mon boy, get in the car.”

The little terrier pounded toward her out of the nearby bush and ecstatically jumped in. Another adventure! Yes!!!

Emily laughed shakily. Worry, grieve, plan later. If at all.

She punched the air.

She slid behind the wheel and slammed the car door shut. Gravel skittered as she reversed out the driveway and hit the road.

1 comment:

Rick said...

Good story with lots of character development. Emily is very credible as a victim who does what it takes to stop being so. Bill is your classic bully. We won't hear from him again. And it's clear who Mince sees as his leader.

Nice work on the theme of being hidden. Emily comes out of hiding physically and spiritually, a lot like Souri come to think of it.